Freedom’s Edge
Comments based on a 27 page Film Treatment submitted to the Ontario Board Canada.
In my humble opinion, the draft screenplay/outline contains all the ingredients for a riveting feature film: a strong central character (the fact that it’s a women enhances the drama and point of view even more so) an exotic setting full of potential both visually and dramatically; all the elements essential to a strong narrative, romance, adventure, action, conflict/tension. I have no hesitation in endorsing this project for further development. In fact were this a Canadian project, I have no doubt we would provide financing to allow the authors to take it to first or second draft.
To repeat myself; Freedom’s Edge has all the potential of being a fascinating entertaining and thus commercially viable screenplay.
S. Wayne Clarkson, Chairman/CEO, Ontario Film Development Corporation